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   작성자   marina116arp    등록일   2019-08-20
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Correction:

Is Time Important to Us?

Out topic today is the importance of time.  I think it is important because we can't buy it and we can't see it. Things that we cannot see such as love, honest, free, also including time, are more important to us than things we can buy. Therefore, time is important to us and we shall not waste our time from now on.

Comment:
Good job, Biny! I'm happy that you've learned a lot form your lesson. Anyway, please go over with the corrections I made. ^^ T. - Clari

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