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   작성자   marina22arp    등록일   2019-11-05
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Correction:

Yes, heat is important.
Because, if there's no heat our body will feel cold.
And, heat makes plant grow.
Moreover, if there's no heat there won't be summer in a year.  
  
 


Comment:
Great job, Lee! you only have few mistakes. Please try to write more sentences next time. ^^ -T. Clariz

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