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   작성자   marina0612arp    등록일   2019-08-09
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Correction:

Land

We need land. We can buy a house and build it in the land. I need a big land. Because I don't want to be a homeless. However, we need natural recources from the land. Thank you!

Comment:
Good job, Daniel! Please write more sentences. Can you make it at least 10 next time? I'll wait for your next essay. ^^ -T. Clariz

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