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   작성자   joo486    등록일   2020-01-14
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My Family

Today, l'll introduce my family. There are four people in my family. First, is my dad. He is a CEO in a company! So he is so busy. ㅠㅠ And he is very handsome. He is (little) rich. Second, is my mom. She is pretty. But I am prettier than she. And she is a Japanese teacher. She is so smart. Third, is my younger brother. He is so cute. He is smart, too. He smart in math. My family is nice! THE END!

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You have an awesome family, Harry! Keep on writing. Good job! ^^ - T. Clariz

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