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   작성자   marina116arp    등록일   2019-09-10
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Correction:

Why is it important to have a good diet?

Today's topic is about the importance of having a good diet. It's because having a healthy body is important. So we have to do diet and improve our physical ability. A good diet makes us more healthy. It is important in our life. We can also have a good mental health. So that's why a good diet is important.

Comment:
Hello, Biny! Thank you for submitting your essay. I'd just like to remind you to properly capitalize letters in the beginning of sentences. Go over with the highlighted words and phrases I marked above. Keep it up! You are doing well. ^^ - T. Clariz

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