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   작성자   alex64    등록일   2021-07-15
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Today I learned about Jazz.Africa-American people made it because they cant's play music because american peoples discriminate with a skin color so they made the own music Jazz I didn't listen about Jazz but i this i heard many times

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Today, I learned about Jazz.Africa-American people made it because they cant's play music because American peoples discriminate them with their skin color so they made their own music which is Jazz. I didn't listen to Jazz but I've heard this many times.

 

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